Showing posts with label better writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label better writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 23, 2015

Writing Prompts


Everyone needs a boost every now and again.  I have decided to add a few prompts every week to encourage my friends and readers to write. It can be silly or serious, just write something and share.  Make it short or long, I promise I will read each and every one. So here are a few prompts to get you started.
1. When I was a kid, I would sit in our kitchen and....
2. Joe is a really nice guy, but...
3. I was in the park the other day and a I saw a huge...
4. Nobody knows this but I once...
5. Overalls and bare feet...

I suggest taking at least 20 minutes and just write your story, poem or thoughts.  I know you have a story inside you... let it out. 

Come back and read what people post.  You don't have to be a published author to have great stories inside you.  Let it go, and explore.  Think of it as therapy. 

I look forward to reading your work! 



Monday, December 21, 2015

Review: Plot & Structure by James Scott Bell






Here is my current read.  I think reading books like this is what causes me to feel such stress when I think about the business of books.  This is my second time through this particular book.  I have, in the second reading, learned a great deal more.  The LOCK system for example did not really stick the on my first time through.  The first time I  read it was a bit overwhelming.  I think at one point I threw it in the air and said, "I have no idea what I am doing."  That was about a year ago.  

This time as I read the book,  I realize that sense of stress I had was because I was trying to FIT all the ideas into my writing style.  BIG mistake. It is important to remember that the ideas are presented and some will resonate with some authors and some will not. What is important to remember is each chapter shares many exercises that if used will deepen your skills in both plot and structure. I have implemented several of the techniques because of the exercises that I completed.  (I must admit I did not do the exercises the first time around; and that was a mistake.)

This particular writer is probably one of my favorites on the craft of writing.  I love that Mr. Bell does give so many ideas and examples that he acknowledges that writing can be taught and that he has practical ideas to spur on creativity. I have also learned to read like a writer and write like a reader because of some of his books.  Clearly he understands the way to craft a novel.  I love his sense of humor as well.   

This is a staple book for any writer, at any level. I would suggest, as does he, that one would read it multiple times. I am finding especially with craft books that the more you read them the deeper your knowledge develops.  I am hoping that a few of my other books on writing will prove to be as helpful and a deep well that I can continue to return for more and more inspiration.

If you have any thought or comments, please add them below.

This book gets : 4.5/5

   

Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Rejection. Does it really suck? Nahhhh!




Today I got another letter.  It essentially said in a lovely way, "Thanks but no thanks".  It hurt for about a minute.  However with the sting still there, inside I felt something else bubbling up.  It is joy.  I know rejection is probably the worst feeling in the world.  I've had my fair share. No matter the reason--love, work, art, social ties it doesn't matter it always hurts when you pour yourself into something only to me met with -- rejection.

I propose we take a moment to reflect on what professional rejection, really represents.  (I don't want to touch on romance as it is so individual and multifaceted.) Instead I would like to look specifically at rejection of your work. Perhaps this sharing is on a small scale, such as friends and family. It could also be on a grand scale such as submitting your work for potential publication or even a proposal that may put your job on the line.  Art, the written word, business proposals (think Shark Tank) -- your work the thing that matters to you.  The thing that you create in the center of your being and dare to share it with another human being hoping for some form of validation that you are not wasting your time/life.

LET ME BEGIN THERE:
IF it comes from your heart. It is NEVER something that is unworthy.  Why you ask? Because you are worthy.  It is not something that another can place a value on, it is YOU, and you are priceless.  The truth is professional rejection makes us stronger as artist, writers, business persons.  It often pushes us to try harder, stretch our thinking, to learn more, dig deeper.  It betters us.

If you are considering giving up because someone/thing has turned down your work. Perhaps it was not your heart at all that you  poured into that thing.  When your heart belongs to your work, you can't put it down because another person simply said, "Thanks, but not this time."

In many ways, putting your work out there for another to judge or critic makes you a winner.  Many artist, writers, business persons never take that leap.  They sit in the corner hoping one day that someone will walk by and notice their work. They call it humility, what it really is -- fear (of rejection).  It is okay to be strong enough to say I want people to see what I have done here.  It's okay really.

Think if the greats never shared their work, but instead waited for someone to hopefully notice. Which more than likely would never happen.  That would mean never a piece by Edgar Allen Poe, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Stephen King-- think where the world would be.. fewer movies that's for sure. Benjamin Button would be but a lost tale, as the Great Gastby.  Never would just the single word "It" have sent shivers up my spine. Never would I have an image clearly in my mind when a person says "Cugo" or "Carrie". Single word titles that strike fear into the hearts of many.  English teachers everywhere at a loss on how to explore the Gothic writings, the poor Tell Tale Heart still beating yet not a soul would know. The Conquer Worm never explored.. the horror of it all.

I learned a long time ago when I was so desperate to be a published artist that many times, it is not the work that is not worthy, but the circumstances.  Perhaps your piece did not work in that "issue" or that time.  That does not mean it never will. My first layout was published many months after I had submitted it. In fact I forgot that I had submitted it!  I now have over forty layouts published in every major magazine in the industry. Why am I telling you this?  It means you must keep trying. Don't give up!
Rejection is not a reflection of YOU instead it means-- that at this time-- in this place, right now it doesn't fit.  That doesn't mean it wont EVER fit.

NEXT I would like to address the concept of  "You don't do it to be published."

POPPYCOCK!   I am going to turn my gear toward writing for a moment but this applies in many places. If you don't write to share your stories, then why are you writing?  Keep your personal journal and it doesn't matter if the structure is solid, or the characters are developed.  IT IS OKAY TO SEEK OUT PUBLICATION FOR YOUR WORK. It doesn't make you prideful, or any less the artist because you  have a longing to share your stories/work.

 It makes you a writer/artist. I am so tired of others saying... "I don't write to get published." I call you out!  IF you are not writing/creating to be published then why are you sharing?  Is it that fear that you will forever be rejected by the publishing houses?  YES that is what it is.  The fear that others may not find value in your work?  YES that is what it is. I say to that... RUBBISH... keep submitting don't be a coward.  It only makes you stronger when you are rejected.  You re-read that piece or as an artist  you may reconsider your color scheme/and design or even reconsider the proposal and how to make it stronger.  Rejection changes your thinking. It makes you LOOK at your work.  If you submit your work and it is rejected, use that to build your craft not tear yourself down.
Learn from rejection , don't be hurt by it. Yes the sting will always come, but when you feel that sting, when it hurts and you begin to question yourself, smack yourself in the face and say, "OKAY how can I make this better?" Then try again! and again! and again!

Be strong and don't EVER let anyone/thing make you feel small or less valuable. You are still learning and trying a work in progress until your last breath is taken.

I have a final quote that I want to share...

"A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit." Richard Bach (Freedom with Writing)

That says it all. Never give up-- not on the things that matter.


Oh and this is good too!

UPDATE: I have submitted to two more magazines after writing this post today. Fingers crossed but if it's not to be, that's okay. See makes us stronger ;)




Thursday, May 15, 2014

Poetry-- Why not give it a shot.

“Unnoticed Bits of Commonality”
By: Erika Hayes

Mundane.
 Commonplace.
 Ordinary.
A pen,
A cup,
A sin
 Existing in the everyday
What is the significance of
 words,
lies,
stories;
These that haunt mankind.
Always the unnoticed
laboring the daily grind.
These that intrude on our life,
“I need a pen!”
“Where is my cup?”
“I hide my sin.”
The tidbits of humanity
Create
 the words,
the lies,
the stories

of our unnoticed bits of commonality. 

Monday, May 5, 2014

Second World - New Short Story

Here we are again. I have a short story to share with you.  PLEASE leave a comment and let me know what you think. It was a fun piece and I enjoyed writing it.  Thank you again for sharing and taking the time to read my story.

Second World
By: Erika Hayes

Charles Nibbly sat in his blue-grey cubicle drumming his fingers. He stifled another yawn and shook his head quickly from side to side. He sat straighter in his chair and looked at his reflection in the monitor. He saw the wily cowlick that cursed him for his entire life had successfully fought off his attempt to tame it with gel and hair spray.  He rocked back in his chair he pressed his fingers to his eyes then down to his neck and massaged the knots that had sent sharp pains down his back.  
 He placed his elbows on his desk and pulled himself forward.  He switched between Facebook and his Second World game to break the monotony of his day.   As he clicked between the two and commented on political post and a few funny memes on Facebook that made him stifle a hearty laugh. In Second World, Charles a mighty warrior defended his scantily clad bosomy computer generated dream girl from an evil magician and his fleet of fire breathing dragons.  It passed the hours and helped to keep his over qualified mind busy waiting for the next routine assignment thrown at him by his under qualified supervisor.  He felt no guilt for using the company time for his internet indulgence.  His job was dull and simple. He often wound up his entire day’s tasks in less than thirty minutes.
  To avoid awkward interactions with his manager Charles occasionally looked up, feigned frustration and tapped on his calculator. He found that it the best way to give the appearance of diligent work.  He lifted his long lanky limbs into the space above him to stretch his tense muscles. Rolling his shoulders, he longed for a life with some adventure.    His postgraduate degree in predictive analytics proved useless and the economy kept him locked to his desk. 
With his work for the day all but done, his thoughts returned to the epic battle he had completed before work this morning. After many attempts, Charles had finally defeated a formable foe in Second World.  Inspired by his achievement, he decided today would be different.  He would do something that was truly brave. He didn’t know what but he knew something had to change.  He pushed his thick black rimmed glasses back to the proper resting place on the bridge of his nose.  The familiar chime of a Facebook notification drew his attention. Or maybe nothing will ever change he thought.  He loosened his Dr. Who bowtie and threw it in his desk drawer.  He clicked back to Second World game where his beautiful companion stood in the same spot waiting for him legs and breast severely exposed. He liked that feeling. A woman waiting for him. 
Monday’s were drudgery for Charles he longed to return to the weekend activity of questing the lands of Second World with his cyber friends.  It struck him odd on several occasions that he had a stronger bond with strangers than his own parents.
 Some days Charles felt he should be embarrassed to be twenty-six years old and still living with his parents, but he had no reason to find a place of his own. He had job and no bills to speak of and his mom insisted on doing his laundry. No girlfriend of life either he reminded himself. 
A digital trumpeter signaled that his new quest had begun.  The world around him dissipated.  Time loses its hold in Second World and soon his fifty-minute quest was nearly over.  The reward would be the accolades of Xenra his lovely curvaceous computer generated companion. She would promise a great rewarded when they entered the platinum member’s, Master’s Private Chamber.  Her high-quality graphics gave her a realism that enticed him to continue to quest day in and day out.  Her program gave her all the right words and sounds when he was alone in his room. Produced to make him feel worthy, and for now, he was satisfied with her fawning. It was worth the $14.99 a month.
His fantasy world shattered when the smooth voice of Erin Wu cooed, “Hi Charles.” He slipped smoothly into this world when he looked up and saw her noteworthy jade green eyes, thick black hair tied in a messy bun and her slender athletic body.
His eyes shifted to his computer screen. Xenra stood nearly bare outside the Master’s Bedchamber waiting for his command to enter.  He quickly clicked the lower left edge of his computer desktop to hide the evidence of his conquest. “Oh!” His voice squeaked. “Hi Erin.” He cleared his throat. “Uh—How was your weekend?”
“The usual.” Her long French manicured fingers rest on the ledge of his cubicle. “You know nothing too great.”
“Sorry to hear that.” He pushed his hands over the top of his thighs to smooth out the wrinkles in his khakis. “So what can I do for you?” He was trying to play it cool while his mind was absorbing every movement, sound and sight of her. Her floral perfume wound into his space and he was enchanted. It held him; he longed to wrap himself in it, in her.
Leaning around the corner of his space to afford more privacy Erin almost whispered, “I was wondering,” she paused took a brief look around, “do you play Second World?”
He thrust his chin back and cocked his head. “Uh—yeah.” he was genuinely taken back by her question. “Why?”  
“Can you friend me? I don’t have anyone to quest with. I just got started and well,” She smiled and his heart skipped.  The dark red lipstick against her warm skin made her perfectly white teeth even more attractive.  “It’s just—I need someone to show me around.”
Charles was surprised to learn that someone as breath taking as Erin Wu would be playing Second World.  He assumed that most the people that played Second World were more like him.  While Charles preferred NPC (Non-Player Characters) because the computer generated companions were always willing to go to the Master’s Bedchamber,  if Erin Wu wanted to quest he was happy to show her the ropes. He would gladly skip the Master’s Bedchamber for real time with Erin Wu.
“Oh uh, sure. What’s your tag?”  Her face contorted in confusion. “Your user name” He clarified and smiled up at her while grabbing a sticky note and a pen.
“Vixen342634” her lips pouted, “it’s stupid, but it was all I could think of when I signed up.”
He looked up from his scribbled note. “Oh it’s not stupid.” He placed the note with her username to his computer screen, “Do the numbers mean anything?”
Her cheeks flushed a bright red. “Yeah, I uh—it’s my measurements.”
He couldn’t stop himself. His eyes traveled up and down her body, “Oh I should have realized that.” His eye widened when he reached her smile he looked down quickly. “I mean—uh well—nevermind.” His face burned. The blood in his body was struggling to determine which route to take, northern or southern.  He shifted in his chair.  “Oh well, yeah—”   His leg was jiggling up and down like a sewing machine. “I will find you and we can maybe quest today.” 
“Thanks!” the elevation in her voice gave him hope. “I wish my boyfriend would play.” Her eyes downcast “But he said it was a stupid time sucker for nerds.”
     The shot to his chest was quick and sharp. A boyfriend, of course she has a boyfriend.
 She added softly. “ Um—not that you’re a nerd, it just he’s kind of a jerk. He just doesn’t get it. You know, like you get it.” She looked up again and held his gaze.  
Charles chest warmed. Hope flickered and he smiled.  Was she coming on to him he wondered.  Stupid look at her, there is no way she is coming on to you!  “Oh—yeah that’s cool. I didn’t know you had a boyfriend.” He held his breath.
“Yeah, but—well never mind.” Her eyes suddenly appeared glassy.
“Oh! I’m sorry I didn’t mean to pry.” He handed her a Kleenex from his desk. “I—I  just never heard you talk about him is all.”
“It’s okay.” She accepted the tissue and flashed him a quick smile. “I think one of the reasons I want to play is well, sometimes I just need to get away.” She looked up than back down again.  “I knew you played and I thought—“
She was confiding in him.  He knew that was a good sign.  She needed someone, and he could offer his small but strong shoulder.  “I just want to—I don’t know I wanted to...” Her large almond eyes flickered as she tried to hold back the inevitable tear.
“I understand if you don’t want to talk about it.” He fought the urge to stand and embrace her. “We can stick to the game. Sorry.” He clinched his fist and struggled against the instinct to punish himself.  “I didn’t mean to make you upset.” 
“No. It’s okay, really.” She dabbed at the tears that made her already long dark lashes appear even darker. “I—I could use a friend right now.” she took in a large breath and exhaled hard.  “Can we maybe talk later?”
Friend, of course friend.  I am always their friend. Damn it!  He was lamenting when he realized she was staring at him waiting for an answer.  “Sorry—I just— I mean, you…”
She forced a smile. “I understand, work and all.” She looked down at her shiny black stilettoes.  “Maybe later?” The small streak of makeup under her eye had drawn his attention.
“Oh no, I was listening it’s just that you have a little smear,” he reached up and wiped the smudge away. “right here.” He pushed back in his chair and crossed his foot over his knee. “I have time right now, I mean if you wanna talk.”
His reward was another big smile. She tilted her head down and touched her cheek where his hand had rested.  A warm glow flushed her cheeks. She looked up and her eyes had changed. No longer were they sweet and innocent but a sultry look held him mesmerized. Her voice had softened to a purr. “I would love that.”  She turned slowly never taking her eyes off his.
Charles attempted to clear his head with a slight shake.  He wasn’t sure what had just happened. He knew that today he was tired of being nobody. No real woman had ever looked at him that way. His pulse quickened. He shifted in his chair. A bead of sweat trickled down his chest. He caught his breath. He lifted his hand to stop her from leaving. “Hey you wanna grab some lunch?”
 Many times, he had dreamt of asking her out. He never believed the opportunity or possibility would arise. He had practiced repeatedly at home in his bathroom mirror. It would be romantic and memorable.
His palms were moist. He licked his dry cracking lips. I’m so stupid, ‘wanna grab lunch?’ really? How frickin’ romantic was that?  His thoughts bounced but time seemed to stop as he watched her for any sign of rejection. The sounds of the office melted into nothing. He tried not to hold his breath, but found himself becoming dizzy at the lack of oxygen.
Erin turned and gave her full attention.  She looked around and gave him her coveted sexy half grin, “Yeah that would be nice. What time?”
He looked at his desk clock, lifted his arms and locked his fingers behind his head as he leaned back in his chair. He could not believe how strong he felt.    “Now?” Surprised at his own courage, he sat up straight again and leaned toward Erin cocked his head.  He decided this was his moment then blurted out, “Or.” Shocked at how loud he had started he deepened his voice and continued, “Or, we can do dinner.”
She arched her eyebrow cupped her chin between her thumb and fingers, looked up as if she were deep in thought.  “Hummmm.”
He attempted to make his intention boldly clear. Charles Nibbly was asking Erin Wu out on a date.  He could barely hear over the pounding of the blood in his ears.  He lifted his hands and large lump formed in his throat. He thought that he needed to give her an out and stuttered, “Or, Whatever.  You know.”  Then he fought to manage his breathing.
“How about both?” her mouth upturned into a half smile.
“Yeah, really?” His voice cracked again like a prepubescent boy.   
She let out a soft seductive laugh. “Really” She leaned over his desk. His eyes immediately drawn directly to her round ample bosom pushed up in a lacey black bra. She planted a warm soft kiss on his cheek. “Maybe breakfast?” the purr in her voice left no question to her intention.
Charles felt the heat of her breath in his ear.  The hair on his arms stood erect with anticipation. He relished in the softness of her lips still fresh on his cheek.  He had spent many nights alone in his room with Erin as the center of his fantasies.  He tried to deepened his voice, “Okay, well let me just shut down my computer.”
He moved his cursor and hovered over shutdown icon he reached for his jacket, smiled up at Erin and winked. “Then we can get out of here.”
“Oh and Charles,” leaning deeper she took his hand.  Her long black hair fell from its makeshift bun and cascaded over her shoulders. The sweet scent of her perfumed hair coiled into his nostrils. He breathed in deeply to take in every second of this moment.
“Yeah?”
“It’s time to wake up.”

He blinked his eyes, looked up at his computer screen just as Erin Wu walked passed his desk, and cursed quietly “Damn it!”

Monday, March 31, 2014

Stephen King-- On Writing

 I have a lot of books on the craft of writing. Why?  My previous rant about reviewers saying that they didn't learn anything or that the book was full of quotes/self promoting authors really was meant to challenge writers to seek to learn from everyone.

 I then started reading Stephen King's memoir on the craft of writing. (Stephen King - On Writing. A memoir of the Craft.) He immediately states that many books on the craft are B.S. (his words not mine.) I took a moment to reflect.

I still stand firmly that we all have something to gain from reading books and articles on our craft.  You never know where inspiration my hit.  I took a moment to examine the idea that a lot of books on the craft are not substantial. I decided that for a seasoned, successful writer such as King that may be true.  For a writer that is still learning it is not.  I know I have a long way to go and every bit of constructive criticism and every ounce of suggestion to improve my writing is welcome.  I know every industry is littered with competition.  It seems everyone I meet wants to or is striving to become the next Stephen King or J.K. Rowling. The truth is there are lots of talented people out there, with potential and they just need to foster their skills.  I like to think one day I will be able to say my book was good enough to print.  I may reach that goal but I can say this, a part of being good at anything means you are capable of accepting that there are always those that are better than you-- and more importantly, you can learn from everyone.

For many years I taught art classes, I was the "expert" in the room.  I remember the moment in my arrogance I made a statement and one of my student (new to the craft) pointed out another possible solution.  It was an easier way, it made sense, I was humbled.  I have never forgotten that day, that moment when I realized "Yup you may be the expert, but you still have a lot to learn."

There is a lot of great advice and ideas in craft books. They help to gain confidence. They point out thing that we love about the stories we read as a "technique".  They help us grow as writers.

I love King's book -- honestly it has left me laughing out loud a few times. He really is a very humorous man. I unfortunately am not a fan of the horror genera. I have not read many of his books--because the scare me.  I don't like to be scared.  I am however aware that he has a great deal of knowledge in my craft and I could gain greatly from reading his book, so I am.

Take every book you read, on the craft, novel, short story and poem and turn it into a lesson. Absorb what you love and take note of what you don't.  The stuff you don't  like is often something that you can learn from. Ask yourself, why don't I like this?  Break it down and make it something you can learn from.

I do love this quote from Mr. King. It inspired me to take the first step, and tap out the first pages of my own story.


 

Thursday, March 27, 2014

Reviewing Reviews.


I have been reviewing some books over at Good Reads.  I spent a lot of time reading the reviews (by other readers) on a book by James Scott Bell called Plot and Structure.  You can get the book through Writer's Digest, in Book Stores or like everyone else in the world, order it on Amazon.

 I recently completed this book and was adding a review when I noticed a string of reviews that were in my opinion harsh and in some ways unwarranted.

When I ordered the book I had just finished reading an excellent book called " The Story Within" By:Laura Oliver.  Which I had also read several reviews.

What do both of these book have in common?  They are books written on the craft of writing.  I find book like these and several others to be inspiring and fun to read. I love reading about something that I love to do, write.

What I discovered while reviewing the reviews horrified me, writers are really hard on each other. Many of the reviews were from fellow craftspersons that seemed to be  looking to find the magic formula to success. (I believe the formula only exist in the form of lots of hard work.) I was heart-broken when I read a few reviews that bashed the authors and said they did not bring anything new to the reader. Must be nice to know everything about writing--you are telling me that you did not get inspired, nor find one thing that you said if even only to yourself  "Ahh that is a great idea."  HA!  I say poppy-cock!   If this is truly the case it may behoove you dear reader to reexamine the book, or for the benefit of all us others --write a book and enlighten us.

Here is my plea.  Writers, craftsmen and women, story tellers please lighten up.  I was deeply disheartened that some of my fellow writers felt they were entitled to tear apart another's work, simply because they felt the book didn't tailor to their needs.

The excellent writer is humble enough to recognize that (s)he can learn from every book on the craft.  Not one of these books said their preferred method of writing was the only way. In fact, I believe both of them clearly and repetitively stated that the ideas were just that, ideas and method that may work to increase or improve ones writing.  They simply presented ideas and ways to better ones skills.

Take this thought, do with it as you please but humble yourself seek out tidbits to make your writing stronger, not chunks to tear apart a fellow artist.  I implore you all to learn from each other and unless your name is Stephen King, J. K. Rowling, JD Robb (Nora Roberts) or some other amazing craftsperson that I don't have the time nor space to list take a self-evaluation, learn to learn, uplift each other. Be proud of your craft and confident in yourself to know you still got a lot to learn baby.  In fact, I would bet that the previously mentioned authors would agree they too are always learning from their peers.  

Just a thought for the day.  Now I'm going to go write!